All Comments on 'Grand Opening Ch. 01'

I enjoyed reading your story and am looking forward to the rest of it. Many thanks.

You are one of my favorite writer on literotica, I stalk your page every week in hopes of reading your fabulous stories. I enjoyed this story, I hope a miracle happens and jack doesn't do the 25 years in prison. I can't wait for the next chapter

I look forward to the coming chapters and hope Jack gets out.

... and can't wait for more chapters.

I like this The story is a bit more sedate by this author's usual envelope pushing standards. Yet the basic plot is still absorbs the reader faster then a case of Bounty towels laid over a toddler's spilt tears.

Very entertaining thanks for sharing.

Wow, I like this story. Felt very sad at the end.

Thank you

Why is this shit accepted for publication ?? Is Lit that desperate for stories? 1*.

Did get some laughs helll almost woke up the dead laughing so hard but that ending

The humour was priceless. but the ending . . . . .

5 Stars. You did a masterful job of sucking the reader in.

Damn,a great story so far. Even though parts sounded like newspaper reports, I really got into it. The last bit's a bit of a heart breaker though.

Spring him

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Well, that was sad...

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!