All Comments on 'Greed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nothing 'wrong' bout a male taking a fem to the cleaners

fems do it everyday as part of their Goddess given 'rights'

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
GIGALO GOT GRABBED

did she get her money returned, TK U MLJ LV NV

phil2213phil2213about 11 years ago
great story

Poor Helena! I enjoyed this story. There were some issues regarding the recovery of Helena's money and the divorce and divorce settlement. An epilogue would cleat this up.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
Well done -

However we have not seen what the damage was from the divorce??

Unless this took place in a very interesting place Martin still gets a community property type settlement.

That still leaves Helena fucked??

calflashcalflashabout 8 years ago
greed

sounds like her greed was in many ways as bad as his

phoenixeyephoenixeyealmost 4 years ago
Romance???

How is this story romantic? I'm still trying to figure it out... Wrong category

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