by Slirpuff
Nice. 5/5. Unless you have lived in a female dominate environment you have little idea how long tit takes to grow a pair.
Great story. It would have been better if he told his mother to go fuck herself. I still gave 5 stars.
Sandy was right, of course. Oh, sh!t! I don’t know what made me say that. Guess all tje Femdom agitprop is wearing me down,
Sore, I could only give it 4 stars. MC took WAY too much shit from the whore before doing anything about it. DMW aka Sumnut
It works as a sort of high fantasy revenge story. Probably not even close to a real world scenario, especially the divorce and everyone gets what's coming to them. But it's a bit of cheeky fun to read.
I have to admit that you write the wimpiest of wimp MCs... I just wonder how you are able to identify them so well.
Odd story. Like a cuckold's rite of passage or hero's journey. More of a fable than a realistic story.
Enjoyed the story, put a smile on my face. Glad Sandy got what was due. Thanks for your writing.
pitiful
Five figures is enough to set him up for life - max $99,000?
some impressive lifestyle.... hahahahaha!
Good story, but too long a wimp to be great. Would have been great to hear mire pain and suffering of his ex and his mom in the divorce aftermath!
Great story line, very enjoyable. I wonder are there really women like that out there ? Are there really men out there that would put up with that shit from the beginning ?
I enjoyed the story a great deal. However I felt that at the end there could have had a twist and it could have turned out that Gary was his father.
The whore of a mother needed to feel some pain. Nothing like an old whore to show a young whore the way
This was so outlandish that it's funny. However, the divorce portion was rather anti-climatic given how their household rhetoric was.
Good story. But he did put up with a lot of crap before he finally grew a pair. I I do agree with 26thNC, he should have tazed that God-awful mother of his too. Twice, at least.
Excellent
The cunts were caught. The wife and her mother-in-law. Cunts of a feather stick together. Ha Ha
Five Stars
Ok story, but it would have cool to get final reaction from his ex and his mom.
A pretty basic cheating wife gets burned, well done by Slirpuff. Shoulda tased his Ma too.
It is hard to understand why he took his time about it. She got half of what could be seen, so it sounds like a no-fault. She confessed, so why wait so long? Still, it was a good story and I thank you.
Realize this whole story was based entirely on cliches and was all one big joke? Signed: BTW
was to stash money. Because why you'd fuck a skank after she just came from fucking another makes him nothing but a long term cuckold. Which falls in line with other slirpuff stories
baloney. cartoonishly evil women. cartoonishly wimpy man. Manly manfriend in bar saves day over beer. WIMPMAN LAYS DOWN THE LAW! and all bow before him. Women shed their clothes like the Fall leaves. Can you say "Incel fantasy?"
Took him too long to grow a pair
Should have done more to wife and mother
Move on don't let experience with her hold you back as it was a lot your fault
Thank goodness he had a friend like Gary. Took while, but he finally took out all the trash.
Once you get past that first page it is a chuckle :)
One thing still bugs me: what is a “large five figured amount” exactly?
Steve is worthy of great empathy. You didn't cheat and give.him a mystical moment. Instead, just be another guy in a bar. People cry about women all the time, what THEY need, what THEY want! We condition our smart boys, ones to follow the rules, to be servants and slaves to their wives and jobs. Unfortunately I know many guys who could have been a model for Steve.
Steve is obviously brain dead or he would never have married her in the first place.
It sometimes takes time to see the light and then put it out. What a bitch! I have started to wonder if there is a limit and it becomes impossible to write a wife who is a bigger bitch than that limit. So far, I've not see it.
Any man who puts up with that level of disrespect from both his whore wife and his shameless bitch mom deserves to suffer
Better late than never I suppose.He should have dumped her the night she told him about Don.
I was really hating Steve for the doormat that he was. When his wife said she fucked her boss for a promotion, he should have brought the wrath of God to her. It ended up good for him in the end though. I would have liked to see him have a 'come to Jesus' meeting with his mom. That would have been epic. Although I don't believe he will have much to do with her in the future and her being alone will probably be a fitting life for her.
This comes as close to reality as I've read in a long time. It is easy for a husband to love his wife so much that he loses himself and lets her control their marriage. But when she goes too far something changes and he has two choices; divorce or murder. Both of these options were considered but he had good council and chose the most effective action. So glad he didn't devolve into a submissive wimp. I probably would have taken the other route; I pretty good with a rifle at very long ranges.
At last a story about anproper man though he did take some time to dump her.
This just popped up on the Feedback Portal, figured I'd give it another look.
"I was required to call home everyday" - "Required"? Just what would happen if you didn't?
"Do you think I'm cheating on you?" - You ARE cheating on him! Even if you're not having sex, you're out with other guys, that's cheating!
"Don't you want to make me happy?" - Yes, and don't you want to make HIM happy? And if he's so brilliant a night out once in a while won't hurt. I assume he's studying weeknights, so if they're not going out on the weekends, just when ARE they dating?
A large "five-figure amount"? That's not even $100,000!
If I wanted to read a boring page of facts, I would read The Wall Street Journal. This was quite entertaining. Not enough payback for Mom. And I would love for father and son to cross paths and compare notes. Now we need a story about Gary. Good writing on this one.
You sound pretty lucky, just like Steve in the story. I didn't hear about a new world king, but congratulations. I was happy to hear about Steve getting rid of his bitch if a wife and his controlling mother. I'm sure he's happier than you are. Wait a minute... I hear that his ex-wife is available. Maybe you two should get together. It sounds like the two of you would get along just fine. You know, with you being all kinds of busy running the world and everything and her needing someone to finance her lifestyle of fucking anything with a swinging dick. I'm sure you wouldn't mind her fucking around because it sounds like you don't like pussy anyway and wouldn't mind her getting all the dick she needs from someone other than you.
the fairy princess came down and touched me with her magic wand. Instantly I became good looking. The tooth fairy left a million dollars under my pillow and I became president of the world.
Slip rut: Husband is an obtuse wimp. The names Carol and Don are in every story.
Husband only empties half of the assets.
What did mom do after and finding dad and talking to him about all this.
And exchange stories. I'll bet he is a happy man (shouldn't have abandoned his kid though).
This Cunt has been cheating on him since they first started dating. He cowardly asks her not to go out with her other guys on the weekends. ARE YOU SHITTING ME! What a Fucking loser.. You don't say anything, you just leave her and find someone better. Fuck! the worst thing you can do is exactly what he did. The rest of the story is just crap after that. Didn't really care if he got his balls back in the end.
A little slow at the start but it picked up speed and finished with a bang. Both of the bitches got what they pretty much deserved.
Steve's mother & His Wife are both Big Time WHORES!!!!.
It is Better to be an ORPHAN than having a lowest piece of SHIT AS A MOTHER.
His wife should've got Aids & died Miserably alone. Same goes for that piece of shit so called mother she should also die Alone Miserably.
He.should have gotten goons to beat the living shit of Don & others whi fucked her & HER AS WELL. At all these invidents Steve must have air tight alibies.
All Cheaters should
Eat Shit & Die Motherfuckers!!!
4*
than he tazed his ass while he was still plugged into the bitch. A twofer. Wasn't a badly written story, kind of an homage to cuckolds and the women who abuse them, but not bad. Should have tazed his mother too. Respect is earned, family only has the inside position, not a lock on respect. And that does include your mother.
to be able to grow anuther pair gonads
whatta friggin joke of excuse for man
makes one wanna believe evolution vs creation, almost but not really.
Sandy’s so concerned about his studies, shouldn’t SHE be helping him instead of going out, with other GUYS no less? She could be typing papers, reviewing notes with him, whatever!
In any case, it’s got nothing to do with trust, if they’re boyfriend/girlfriend she shouldn’t be going out with other guys, any more than HE should be going out with other girls, which you can bet SHE wouldn’t stand for!
"I'm your boyfriend, and shouldn't I be the one to take you out on the weekends?" – Um, yeah!
Arghh, person shifts, again! Steve is telling he story in the first person, he can’ know what his wife and mother talk about when he’s not there. In any case, SHE’S got a lot of nerve complaining about HIM cheating!
I recommend RichardGerald "Jailbraeking" story.....the two mothers figures are similar to this!
a hubby accused the wife of sleeping wit other mens.
truth is,, the only person she slept with was her moronic hubby, everyone else she fornicated with.
1 star for this auto-bio
I love it when the cheating bitch get their just deserts its so gratifying
Kind of reminds me of "Blondie" totally enjoyable 5*s
I wondered why he didnt look u his father also, yet why did the SOB abandon him to a mother like that one?
As soon as he went away to school he should have just ignored his mother, she had no holdover him.
As far as Sandy goes, her insistence on going out without him was certainly a red flag, but as soon as she and his mother started going over his job offers he should have walked.
I almost gave up on this story early on owing to her actions but even worst his own mother's support of them. I think he was right guessing his mother's actions had been the cause of the parents divorce. Too bad he was raised by someone with that mindset.
I did continue with the story because I've come to appreciate all I've read from this author. I didn't like the story or end but it was well done so I rate it a 5 as I usually do and chalk this one up as a diversion from his usual stories
This wife may possibly have had a weak shot at an EEO case--if the EEOC had jurisdiction (number of employees in the company needs to be over a certain limit), the EEOC is little to the left of socialist Sweden; or in some of the more leftist commie pinko state EEO boards. But she has a real hurdle in trying to prove any harrassment by her boss based on what the author has given us. She decided to use her body to get an advantage in a promotion, and then choose tokeep on giving. No "put out or walk" from the boss here. And after the initial tryst, she voluntarily is the company whore. So she doesn't have much of an EEO case against management. She doesn't appear to have any claims against co-workers who assisted her in her choice to pull trains at a party. Only if she has an EEO claim can the husband possibly get anything from the company! And she has to recover in ordercfor himto do so. Given the facts of the story, it seems impossible that that husband and wife would cooperate in an EEO claim.
The idea that a company's "morals" clause gives any protection to the husband or any cause of actionby him is as big a myth an offer to sell you the Brooklyn Bridge. Morals clauses are crafted by the company to protect the company's interests. Think about how foolish this would work out -- I hire you to work for me, but I insist on a clause in your contract of employment that says if you do bad things, I can fire you. (Just pick any kind of bad thing--bank robbery, treason, etc.) Some of the morals clauses can be unusual -- at the Coka-Cola Company, at least in the past, the employees couldn't drink (or more accurately, get caught) drinking Pepsi. Obviously, Coke didn't want the public to think Coke employees didn't like Coke. If you violate the morals clause, the company's remedy is to fire you or take some other adverse personnel action against you. This is what the morals clause is and does. It's to protect the company from having somebody who does bad thing (usually bad things that make the news) working for the company. Now imagine that your employer has a morals clause, but then adds to the clause, and by the way, if you do bad things, then I will pay money to anyone you've hurt, even though it may be off work, on your own time, and the company has no knowledge of the bad thing you are going to do or have done. So, following the story lines of the Lit. authors, the employee robs a bank (on his own time, no company assets involved). Then the stolen money is all burned when the red dye bomb inside the bag goes off. Per the Lit. Authors, the babk robber's employer is obliged under "the morals clause" to re-imburse the bank!
Now some of the more unusual stories here, as where a company is really just a criminal conspiracy forcing / blackmailing the wife into prostitution (the company whore stories) where the owner of the firm is the blackmailer, then the husband may have a cause of action.
But in most of these stories ( and I don't mean to single out this author, many, many Lit. Authors use this plot device), there is no basis for the innocnet spouse to sue and recover under a "morals clause"
I liked the story and gave it a 4.
It's fun to see how skankiness in women seems to now pass into several generations. It is the norm. Glad he dumped both. Mom and wife. Good job
Not bad, the ending per usual rushed. But not bad. With a better ending it would have been 5
He was lost from when he was little. A domineering mother and a domineering cheating whore slut skank cunt whore. Oh. his mom was too. Drove the Pop out. Thankfully he had a friend and together they resolved his situation. Not enough revenge but he got his balls for the first time in his life.
It was quick with little detail. Needed more and more revenge would have made it complete. Also what happened between him and his mother for one?
... but not great 3 stars you'd done much better. Both the characters and situations are unbelievable.
DWhuecuck speaks for all wannabe cucks - high ground be damned just give us creampies!
"his unworthy actions"?
obviously you've never heard the phrase "no matter how hot she is, there's always some man somewhere who's had enough of her bullshit"
clearly you're either a slut bitch or a cum guzzling cuckold.
His wife is hot, he should use that to his advantage. Bet he's gonna get humiliated for his unworthy actions. Revenge on him would be a treat. And easy to do. Everyone knows he is an ahole and has enemies, so they get an alibi and then he get his.
the high road has gotten alot of men fucked over, so buck up young grass hooper and gets some fucking balls.
I like it much better when at least one of the spouses takes the moral high ground. I know, however, based on the popularity of some authors here that I may well be in the minority. LOL
Excellent story. He revolted against the humiliation. However he got a good friend, who could help him!
assumed he was weak mallabe and completely controlled, and they were wrong! With some support and validation, he's doing just fine. I liked this
I am having a darling time looking at all the poorly written and grammatically incorrect comments by people complaining about your grammer and spelling.
Not that you need some help, but really!