All Comments on 'Guilt and Lust'

being a hopeless romantic this really made me smile. Yes there are a few flubs but nothing too terrible. try the free version of Gammarly, it will help a lot. Looking forward to your next story Happy St. Paddy's Day!

Imaginative and well written. Thanks for great read!

5*

I loved the noir flavour of this, all guts and grit in greys, blacks and whites. The plot was excellent.

However, it was let down by the lack of skilled editing to pick up wrongly used homophones and poor spelling. Hey, good editing shows that you respect your readers, so it's always worth getting.

Thank you for a great read.

It really wasn't GOOD. Not horrible either, but I would think it should have gone through a proofread before posting.

It made good use of ancient myths, but in a modern setting.

Sloppy orthography; convoluted metaphysics; I expected better.

Not really my usual go but I liked it, thanks!