All Comments on 'Gym Girl'

by jolly_rogering

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horney47horney47almost 11 years ago
Excellent story telling skills

Had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. Love a great success story, lol. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well done!

Excellent tale. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

jolly_rogeringjolly_rogeringalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the encouraging comments, folks! Glad you enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I yearn for Zero stars...

...what a stupid premise and ridiculous story. The pervert pays to strip the girl and she turns into a hooker with free repeats. Right. I think the entire wank patrol voted for this to give it a high rating. Lousy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Um...

It'd be a good story if the author hadn't gone out of his way to make the main character such a colossal creep.

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