All Comments on 'Gym Showers'

by lovb2001

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o2byoungo2byoungabout 7 years ago
Hot, and worth reading

It's nice that a few comments can "rejuvenate" a story that was posted several years ago. I mostly read the "new" stories, but sometimes, like on this one, another comment caught my interest today.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Omg so good

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yes

Pls

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Give us the night episode.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please MORE

MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

fuck me that sounds amazing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more

More, more, more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
hell yea

Please tell us more! I got so horny reading this story. I <3 it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

He'll yes!!! Got me super boned. More!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Please continue this story. Got me rock hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice.

Exquisite composition, good use of adjectival clauses... Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I love your story I want to be you or Sean now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Please add more! I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
great

A really great story. I love stories where a boy is horny on another boy and wants to fuck him but then is fucked by him. When I was 18 I had fallen in love with my best friend but he was straight and I didn't want to bother him. Then one day we were in the shower room. He just shampooed his cute ass and then spread his ass-cheeks apart and cleaned his nice pink asshole. I saw this and instantly had a huge boner. Then my friend suddenly turned around and saw my errection. I was shocked. I turned around and said "sorry". And then my friend was behind me, pressing me against the wall. He told me that he loved me and always had wanted to fuck my ass. And then he shove his 10 inch rock hard cock inside my ass and fucked me for twenty minutes. It was heaven and from that day on we fucked each other every day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Pics babe!!

You should add some pictures of your juicy cock so we can all Jack off. I'm horny and dripping cum. A good website to cum to is www.musclegayhunks.com get some pics babe!!! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wooooooow

woooow, what a story!!! i liked the fact that it was in the "i/me" perspective

switchhitter1966switchhitter1966almost 15 years ago
Very hot...but...

Loved your story and look forward to reading more (I really hope you continue it), but there was a time in the story that it went from a first person narrative to a 2nd and then back again. This has happened to me in the past also. Do yourself a favor and have someone edit the story. Even Stephen King has an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Chris

Omg that was an amazing story! nice job! I would LOVE to hear more! Whether what happened that night or your relationship or more stories of your senior year. Keep writing! :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great Story

Please tell me more stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very good fuck story

I loved the story.Wish that you would continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
M O R E !

I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great Story!

U HaVE to continue this story!! I wanna see how the relationship goes!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good stuff

made me laugh out loud about Kyle taking the towel.. I never had the guts..hope ur going to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very nice...

C'mon man, I wanna know what happened...more details about you and Sean please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
more

It would be good to continue this story.

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