All Comments on 'Gypsy Vengeance'

The rest of story was pretty stiff. Akin to rejected episode of ' Alibi ' . Sydney goes undercover as a gypsy. It did end on a intriguing note and there was nice tension between main character and her mysterious fan.

If kevklein practices mechanics of storytelling as much as his characters have studied martial arts, he will be very adept indeed in the fullness of time.

She may know how to fight and kill but she definitely need to work on protecting herself better. Hopefully Vitaly is keeping watch over her if he wasn't the person who snuck in on her.

Not bad for first chapter.

Anxious for more, in spite of the fist to the side of the head.

Can't wait for the next episode - would make a great novel

The story is not done. But it could take awhile before I can upload it. Had to buy another computer so I had to transfer everything to my old lap top, and my new notebook doesn't open word processor. I have many, many stories on the go but most won't be uploaded. Just my best ones. I have a book published. Anyone interested, it's called 'A Collection Of Erotic Tales'. They are much shorter stories but are still very erotic.

... will there be a sequel... please? :)

Well shoot. Once more, I am lured into a good story, written several years ago, and left hanging for more, and no chance of it.