All Comments on 'H is for Heuristic'

by Robotman1974

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
pant pant

I would love to sneak in and take the place of one of those fembots...... I would show those guys a thing or two about making love.....all night long.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Awesome Story

I want a fembot now.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
more

it took me a while to read through, but is there going to be more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This is SOME body of work!!!!

Dude! This is some work of fiction!!!!!Your story has everything, that a good reader is hopping for. I haven't read anything as exiting as your work in a while.

p.s. Love Zeppelin too.

DMITRY

kabannnn@comcast.net

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Touching

More than anything, a very touching story. Well worth the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Best ever

This has got the the best (and the longest) story I've read on this site. Looking foward to reading the rest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I want to make a Fembot now!!

I love your take on the future and can't wait for that to happen. "If only" You have a great imagination and have kept me reading for days anticipating more. I can't wait for more from your mind to these pages.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Well-done; grammatical note.

Even though this isn't my kink, I kept reading it for the story, so well-done!

A technical note: I notice you have "layed" instead of "laid" throughout all your writing. Even though grammar should be a minor issue, it is jarring enough to throw someone out of your universe and back into their own head, especially when repeated like that.

AvidReader987AvidReader987over 10 years ago
Great story

I wish I could give it a higher score!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I KEPT ON HOPING BYRON WOULD FUCK NATASHA FROM BEHIND, CHRIS

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