All Comments on 'Haldir and Valen'

nice story. I think you could continue their travels and have a good story. The one thing would have been some clarification. I thought he was an elf until the end when he said 'man and elf' about them lying together. I'd have liked to know how he met Haldir. I assume Gregor was also human. How did he come to be a knight amongst the elves? His surprise at humans being settled there would imply there weren't a lot of humans around so i wonder why he was there. Aside from that, I think it was a good story and I'd like to hear how they get the order running again or some such thing.

amazing story! however, a woman so weak she does not have the upper body strength to do that?! I think not. small detail aside, excellent work.