All Comments on 'Hali Makes Them Feel Better'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

Loved your ending. Very sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

That was very hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Omg

Fucking yaaaaaaaas!!!

maddictmaddictabout 9 years ago
To be clear ?

A whore for business.

A slut for pleasure.

I'm not a real detail driven guy, but, think I like slut better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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I liked how he acted tough and everything but at the end it was like he was in love😍

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I feel like Todd is so hot even though he hasn't been described...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
more!

pleasee continue this story! love todd

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
hell yh!

this is so fucking hot! plz continue! I luv todd hes so hot the way he acted and hali is so pretty!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Excellently written. If only there were truly submissive cheerleader captains in real life. Maybe I didn’t stay late enough when the football guys and the cheerleaders partied!

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