All Comments on 'Hallelujah Ch. 05'

enjoying the story immensely thank you for sharing

What ever shall he do now?! LOL

Such good writing!

really...

we all KNOW what is coming. AJ will say is sorry promoise to get "help"... maybe even gets some real "help" ... and super dumb fuck head here will be leftout in the cold

Most of this sickos stories are worth 2-3 stars. And here he is with 4.7 !! Typical Brit. This whole perverted nation is worthless.

Sick perverted Brit-hating monkey is finger-fucking itself then sucking its digits! What a waste of oxygen that nonce represents. Nearly as fagged out as that ass-pirate Harry!

One of the worst. Pompous and ignorant. 1.

Wow! Five stars.

I can't stand this pussy anymore. I quit.

Still love it. Still five stars.

otherwise it would ruin the shit-storm appearing on the horizon (and bring a good yarn to a premature end).

One thing I like about this story is listening to the songs on YouTube. Didn't think much of Phil Ochs - I think Tim Hardin ("Blacksheep Boy" and "If I Were a Carpenter") was much better, and like Phil Ochs, he died young at 39 from a heroin overdose.

Great story. I enjoy the back story of the music industry. I heard "Small Circle of Friends" long ago. It was a light and airy ditty about the vicious murder of Kitty Genevese and the calloused indifference of her neighbors. They heard her agonized screams as she was repeatedly stabbed outside their open windows, yet did nothing to help her. I wish I had followed up on him and his career. He deserved a better life.

Mate, Jasmine says jump and the wimp says how high. If they reconcile, atleast make the bitch work for it.

Man, its getting hard to stay interested in this. The main character is as whiny as they come and it annoyed me that he pretty much just let her back in his life without a confrontation. Hopefully you can turn this around.

So call the police bitch.