Hallelujah Ch. 07

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"What was that all about?" I ask.

"I don't know," she says, "but I think I needed it."

"Yeah, well, next time...can we skip the kiss and go straight to the laughing?"

"I promise."

"Good."

We lay there, on the disgusting patio floor, for over a minute before she says, "I had fun tonight, Jake. Thank you." She sounds genuinely appreciative.

"I did, too," I admit. "But getting up for work in the morning is gonna be hell."

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good story!!

Not everyday that my hometown is referenced in a story on this site. Ok, probably the only story that mentions my hometown and an actual establishment in it. Good story, looking forward to seeing how it turns out

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 10 years ago
Loved it

A very interesting chapter. Still not sure where it is headed. Five stars. She needs to elaborate on why her affair involved him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
pot

meet kettle

Harryin VAHarryin VAalmost 13 years ago
JAKE is just such a pathetic clueless loser

I hope e falls for Jasmine and she fucks

him over again

seekermikeseekermikeover 13 years ago
You've roped me in

I used to house manage a 300 seat venue and had a chance to listen, work with and babysit a lot of up and coming musicians. Some of them were the greatest people in the world to work with, heck, some I still keep in touch with. And then some have caught a wiff of success and it goes straight to they're head. I'm hoping you don't keep us waiting so long for the next installment, because I need to know how long it takes for him to pull his ass out of his head and figure out how to "capture the lightning in a bottle", and record something you can listen to. Rock on.

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