All Comments on 'Halloween Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Interesting

tale, I liked the ending. Very inventive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Educated First Time

He knew a lot for a first time shot.

Loved the slow progress.

Post more.

NamizujsNamizujsover 18 years ago
A nice first timer!

Really good and capable for one :-)

THX

John

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Amazing

I rarely say this about stories.. but that was amazing and cute. I loved it. Write more?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good story...

But I would have liked for him to say no to Emily and go with Ang instead. The dacning scene and description was extremely hot.

jlarue1959jlarue1959almost 7 years ago
More please!

Love to read the next chapter with John & Angie! I'm sure they're ready to get down and dirty ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Present tense or past tense?

Pick one and stick with it, please.

Anonymous
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