All Comments on 'Halloween Treat'

A lot of guys can relate to this story. Halloween brings out the sexy in many women. Good job realistic story

Nicely built, credible storyline, exciting action.

Now I need to read the rest of your submissions.

Thanks !!!!! Don

Short and very sweet :) I like that you made an effort to give the characters some depth - the story has more impact that way, and it ends up being both sexy and nostalgic.