All Comments on 'Hammer of Darkness Ch. 01'

I -love- stories like this. Eagerly awaiting the next installment

Intriguing story! I love the characters and world you have created. I feel very badly for Logain and the twins losing each other. But I can't wait to see more of Logain's story. Keep writing!

great story can not wait ot see how it all plays out most enjoyable thank you

Thanks for all the praise guys, I really wanted to get this down and out before I forgot how I wanted the first chapter to go. To everyone that hated it, there will be a reunion of brothers... And that's all your getting on that.

... is this erotica?

The Erotica is coming. I'm not the kind of man who reads stories that are straight to sex in improbable situations, (except my other story, cause it's very love at first site) So there is going to be back story and a build up. Wanna read the erotica? You have to wait. That's all.

This is a great start to the story, and I can't wait for more. I check it several times a day to see if you have updated yet. Keep up the good work.

I nornally don't comment so please hear me I love this story.