All Comments on 'Hanna's Story'

I see you're a first-time author, so welcome! Your prose is well-written and I thought it was original that you made it an allegory. One comment is that it all went by so fast that I had some trouble grasping the motivations of the main characters. I never figured out why the priest was doing these things, or why Hanna was allowing things to be done to her (or even if she had a choice in the matter). The priest demands that Hanna trust him but nothing in his treatment of Hanna would engender that trust. All in all, a good beginning in my opinion, and I look forward to your future work!

Loved this writing,Well written for a first time story,,

I look forward to reading more from Hanna