All Comments on 'Happy Birthday'

I was ready to be distracted, and your story didn't disappoint, believe me! next time, a little more with your gal pal, but you obviously get into your writing...I know I did! see you in the Pyramids room another time, hopefully.

This was hotter than all hell, but believe it or not, the lack of consent on her part really turned me off. If there was something in the story about havine a stop word and knowing that they would have stopped if it had been used, but not wanting to use it, it would have been a much better read for me.

Great fantasy - almost felt like I was at the party - and wish I had been.

But I was hoping that they were all going to have her/you as was hinted at in the first part. That would have been very hot. But that is just my turn on. I really enjoyed 'Learning from Master' as well. I hope you will submit more. You might enjoy the story that I have just posted. Keep writing. Hubee

love this one!