All Comments on 'Happy Friday'

by lisaEllyn

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot!

Amazing writing!

DidaktylosDidaktylosabout 11 years ago
Hot !!!

This story works for me. That's all I need to say.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
DAMN...

Damn this is hoooottt!!!!!

LiveCatLiveCatabout 11 years ago
Wow!

Generally - the whole BDSM thing isn't my thing......but that's one of the hottest stories I've ever read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
WOW

I can so relate to this story. I would love to experience BDSM but my wife is not so into it but she's willing to try to make me happy. This is a BDSM love story. Thank you.

OliviaBeaumontOliviaBeaumontabout 11 years ago
Love it

Stunning. And I adore being tied. :-) Has been awhile though.

Olivia

submittingsparklessubmittingsparklesabout 11 years ago

This is beyond hot. Your characters are believable and sexy, and your writing style is detailed and erotic. Nice work.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 11 years ago
Verrrry good.

I liked how believably you portrayed these two lovers. I'm a sucker for good dialog, and yours was lovely. More than that, you conveyed the sense of tension that grew in Michelle, and conveyed it very well. We got some useful peeks into Kerrin's arousal, too. I wish the piece had been longer. Hopefully, you will write more about these two.

BlueFish11BlueFish11over 10 years ago

Awesomely hot story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow

Excellent story, great characters and very hot!

FandeborisFandeborisover 1 year ago

This was awesome! If I had been female, I would have gotten wet!

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