by lisaEllyn
Generally - the whole BDSM thing isn't my thing......but that's one of the hottest stories I've ever read!
I can so relate to this story. I would love to experience BDSM but my wife is not so into it but she's willing to try to make me happy. This is a BDSM love story. Thank you.
Stunning. And I adore being tied. :-) Has been awhile though.
Olivia
This is beyond hot. Your characters are believable and sexy, and your writing style is detailed and erotic. Nice work.
I liked how believably you portrayed these two lovers. I'm a sucker for good dialog, and yours was lovely. More than that, you conveyed the sense of tension that grew in Michelle, and conveyed it very well. We got some useful peeks into Kerrin's arousal, too. I wish the piece had been longer. Hopefully, you will write more about these two.