- Incest/Taboo
- Hard Times
- Page 2
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Ashley had started to quiver on the weight bench during the last set. She was straining on rep 10 when she finally go it up and decided to only do 10 instead of her planned 12. She rested the weight back on the bench. "I think I am done as well." She mentioned and started to sit upright. "I think we have both had enough excitement for the day. What do you say about a quick shower and a few laps in the pool?" She asked with her eyes twinkling.
"Sure, meet you out there in a few." Gary knew he was in for a long day.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoTo summarize, a full chapter of this story could be paraphrased as "sister-in-law moves in, brother-in-law lives with a perpetual hard-on, sister doesn't seem to mind," and not a lot more, ...
Anonymousabout 13 years agoWhile I'm a very big fan of story and plot to my erotic literature, you can arrive at a point where you're no longer teasing you're just leading. I was hoping for a great romp on page 2 and well, nothing happened. If you're just starting out I have some praise for your build up, but as you've written before you should know you left us sitting without the glow of arousal but the painful sting of a blunt end with no fun.
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I may have the lexicon to write, the grammatical skills, even the will and want; but I refrain because I don't want to produce something like what you did here.
JackKingover 13 years agowell written, and I appreciate the slow tease and his attempt, albeit weakening, at restraint.
Anonymousabout 15 years agoRambles with no sense of direction. Good start but no follow through.
