All Comments on 'Hard Times: Fun in the Water'

Killed it when you got the wife involved. In-law sex is only hot when they are cheating. Otherwise it is just inconsequential sex, just a plain threesome.

The inclusion of the wife, especially when it is implied that the two sisters pleasured each other, makes the story hotter. Because the husband is getting frustrated constantly it seems like a wonderful twist to have all three enjoying each other.

SOOOOOO sexy, i have a sister in law who i have the same feelings for. Blasted twice reading this. Thanks

Fine story, nicely written, with a different approach. Thanks!

Gary has it made. Maybe both sisters will be wanting to continue this affair and even have his baby? That way each sister can babysit and change diapers as the job is needed...

I somehow find it hard to think of doing your wife's sister as being incest. But, I thoroughly enjoyed it anyhow.

I'm only jealous 'cause my wife doen't have a sister or girlfriend who comes around . DAMN !!

Just when a story shows promise, the errors start to show up.

Get an editor and clean your stuff up 'cause you show some

serious promise.

... you decided that 'rimming' wasn't enough! Why the fuck does every author out here NOT KNOW ABOUT TYPHUS BACTERIA??? Fucking morons! But I'm sure your characters won't mind until the dehydration and projectile vomiting start. Why don't you do a sequel about that?

Good!!!!!!!

Please continue the story. You have a great way of getting to the end. It is enough to leave you hanging. You finished this one up nicely, but please continue this into the bedroom.

Got me going!

I'm not a real fan of rimming either ... but i just skip those bits. Can't win them all ;-)

And to the anonymous poster ... If the threesome with the wife is not your cup of tea .... why read this in the first place, the setting is clearly advertised in the subtitle

The hardest I've gotten reading erotica in a long time.

I really enjoyed your story.... I wish it was me with the 2 sisters!!!

First off, doing the sister-in-law isn't incest, it's cheating; with the wife involved it's a run-of-the-mill threesome, and both "chapters" together barely add-up to any kind of story, just uncomplicated sex. No real effort here, just an attempt to cover-up for the non-delivery of anything at all in the first "chapter"

No stars, this chapter was run of the mill with a contrived sex episode thrown in to make up for the non-story, non-sexy first chapter. You can write, you just can't tell a story

Need more

One of the hottest sexiest stories I've read in quite a while. Can't wait for more.

Great story, but it ended to abruptly and your grammar is horrible. Makes reading it a tough task.