All Comments on 'Hard Times with Mom Ch. 13'

A great story, with a beautiful build up. A happy ending and very erotic vivid sex. Well done and thanks

Well done. you obviously put a lot of effort and soul into writing this enjoyable and hot story. Thanks!

You went in a completely unexpected direction. Great job. You also got me wondering, I wonder what it would be like to fall asleep with someone in the spoon position with your cock in them. That is a nice thought.

the most intense of them all you can feel the love really and coming from a horny older gal couger yes thank you

absolute excellence.....don't stop writing

A really wonderful, exciting, and compelling story. Thank you very much for writing it.

Superlative job by a very creative writer who blends romance, heat and wit into a cauldron of complex incest lust, all of which combines into a very explosive sexual situation.

Kyle has hit another home run, I can almost see the son and mom cumming. Kyle, when will you pen a book? You for sure have a fan. VJ

This highly sexed-up love story is beautiful in complexity and powerfully passionate lust. What was a desperate, horny woman's physical need has become a true romance that may well turn into a new family

starring the now mature young man and his reborn lady love. The wild sex literally can set the town aflame. The moral and psychological Gordian knot that every couple has to unravel is detailed in great style with realistic pendulum swings. Great hot stuff!

You have written and awesome story, kylewhitney. I've enjoyed reading it a lot. I liked you style and story-telling, taking your time to build up and explain things. to me, it's all about characters development. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

The only long literotica story that i have stayed around to read

it was the best story i've read. great job, lots of great sex. is this the end?????? could have one were the sister and niece come for a visit..

You have an erotic mind and (I think) have a lot of erotic experience behind you. It became melodramatic and wearisome toward the end.....but that is to be forgiven, given the overall content.......superlative!!!! jhd

...as anyone who's read it already knows. I have read all the great books, and none was greater than this. It had me in goose-bumps, it had me in stitches, it had me in tears. If only I'd read it as a much younger man, my life would have taken a different course. I'd have realized when I should have that the source of my love and the source of my shame were one.

this is one of the greatest, what I have read in Literotica - long and not so easy go'in & with happy end. Respect Kyle!

It would have been interesting for you to have developed the kinky desires they both allegedly had. She was always feeling guilty and apologizing, so why not relieve the guilt and have him punish her? Start with just spanking her then move on to heavier more serious things. Just a thought. Was a good read though.

WOW!!!!!

as someone said in one of the other comments you should continue this by expanding the relationship as you have established the "kinkiness" of each of them individuslly and as a couple so in a sense "anything goes"--

and you do write remarkably well (read hot) so what could get repetitious/boring in someone else's hands ( no pun intended) would likely be just more heat for us---

Every relationship has 'em...Great story, but I gotta go now...Mommy's calling me...

A truly wonderful series.

This was a GREAT Series, but i sure wish that you would continue.

You do remember their promise to return to Mom's sister's for Christmas, and of course the Niece, and the just have to have a Baby, Please keep it going.

just so happened that mum and i were in the middle of fucking each other whilst reading.

The " author " should get money back from her primary school. Awful.

One of the worst.

This series is one of the best... I honestly like these stories rather than the jerk off ones thsi site is many made of and alo of those are really good so awesome job.. I hope you can continue the story with the niece..

I loved this terrific story.I want to have Aunt Linda as my live in lesbian lover (I'm bi),

Boy did I ever have a sheltered upbringing, I never licked my Mummy, but I did see my Aunty Betty's big tits a lot of times.

Bring back Aunt Linda I say, I adored her filth

I just discovered literotica and this is the best thing I've read so far; I love the development of the characters, especially Mom, she's so funny I bet you had a lot of fun writing her dialogue. I was laughing out loud at times and almost crying at others; the bit when she realises she was his first time was really well written and very moving. Look forward to reading more.

of some other similarly good mom/son stories?? I have read about 20 and none are anywhere close to this hot..

The first 5 chapters are the hottest thing i have ever read or seen or heard... :)

What an erotic, tender love story......please continue!

This is a great story. I agree with all the other guys (not including the ones thay say your story sucks) that say you should continue this story. I have something else to say...GET THIS SHIT OFF OF LITEROTICA AND PUBLISH IT AS A BOOK!!!! All you need to do is get it spell checked and stuff a little and add a bunch of chapters. Im also confident that you would be able to make a book 2. But if you dont want to, then i understand. You could also make a sequel to all of this about how Aunt Linda seduced her daughter. You have a bright future ahead of you depending on what you do. Enjoy your life man.

-A.

P.S. i hope you make more.

P.P.S. I really hope you make more of this story.

P.P.P.S. Dont forget the neighbor person...you could also make it so that they seduce her husband.

the character mom is just amazingly good.

this last chapter is the best of the lot although the other chapters are superb too.

i liked your story a lot i was just going to jerk off to it but it took me by suprise on how good it was writen i hope you keep wrighting thanks for a good storie

I read this, at first looking for an excuse to jack off, but I was enticed and had a fantastic time reading this. You're a great writer as well

Just sensational!

simply amazing you should writ a bonus chapter where they go to the moms sisters and have an orgy though it would be grate .

As like the others, i came for a quickie but damn

That was the most interesting story i have ever read. You're an

Amazing writer and thank you so much for the story

As someone who's read and enjoyed pretty much all your story (some parts are a bit past my comfort zone, despite being interested in incest. Weird, huh?), I'd like to know if there's anything more. I would really like to know what happens at Christmas, for instance.

Also, by the sound of it, you've almost experienced all this yourself. Either way I liked the psychological aspect when it came to the relationship and control issues.

Scale

holy cow-read this all day today-phenomenal story-great characters, great hot steamy sex, well-written and thoughtful-great job thanks

Well written, wonderful story. I could not stop reading.

I read all 13 one behind the other; you've been added to my Favorite Authors, and the series is bookmarked as one of my All-Time Favorites as well.

You do need a better Editor; but of course nothing posted for 4 years, that's a crying shame!!!

I'm sooooo confused though because there are open doors; Aunt Linda, Cousin Rachelle, the new beautiful blonde neighbor (Grrr; I was thinking that she was going to be "the one that could bring home to mother"). The 3 of them could have lived together to carry on & expand upon the family legacy.

You said that it's the wrap-up; but ended with "Even if it didn't turn out to be for 'ever after,"; scratches head in bewilderment!!! ... DKP

Great story, very descriptive and details well written a very kinky and erotic story that i enjoyed.

Thank you for taking the time to let us into your world . This is a wonderful love story that was well written and presented to a grateful audience . Also thank you for really finishing the story with the final chapter it was worth it .

I am sorry we have lost you and your talent , hopefully to return always missed .

Thanks

TX Cracker

Stands the test of time. It was so easy to identify, first with the mom and then the aunt. The story feeds the fixation I have with my older sisters son. I imagined my sister giving into temptation, or as Kyle suggest, exposing herself to get what she really wants. The story always inspires me to spread my legs.

Love from india

if this is how they spend their hard times, i wonder what it means having "easy times"...!!!!!

This was one of the best stories I've ever read on literotica. Great story line, great passion. Will definitely read it again. Thank you

You sure are a good writer.... it all seems sooooooo real!

Keep it up Keep us cumming

can't wait to read the next!!!!

Woow, what more can I say? This was a very long and intense story. The best I read so far.

One of the best I read up here. Very well done.

Good story well told. I bet there are lots more sons and mothers who enjoy each other like your two fine characters did. If they are adults and want to then why not. I admire the courage it takes to say to hell with convention and do what they want. Maybe the best fucking possible. Well Done!!

Very well thought out and developed story, very much appreciated it! One of the best reads on this sight, keep up the excellent writing!

Too. Loooong. Just too repetitive and dragged out. And did I say it was too long?

Absolutely amazing story, loved every second and hope you continue to post!!

... that our spouses could love us as only our moms can, and could fuck us as only whores can?

Excellent story!

Please don't stop writing!

I am sad this story is over, but I look forward to your others!

Honestly, if there was an "R" version with a step-mom you could go mainstream.

Your character development is excellent & it's all very readable!

Thank you!

This was one well written and extremely erotic story. I thoroughly appreciated how each chapter built on the previous storyline. Chapter 5 in particular was HOT and the story scene where they are showing off in the open hotel window made my whole body HARD! Looking forward to reading your other works, and thanks for sharing.

Story! Good buildup, believable characters and horny as hell! One of the best writers on here. 5 stars on every chapter.

Have read all 13 chapters & rated each one a 5. I value character and plot development. I understand and appreciate the development of character internal conflict and the reasoned logical resolution of said conflict. This is an excellent, well written erotic story as opposed to a "jerk off" pornographic tale. Having read various comments about various chapters, I can not believe some of the hang-ups adults have about some sexual activities. With continued advancements in genetic modification and DNA manipulation, at some point in time, incest will not be a cause of concern. Who you love is not important, that you love is.

Fantastic and so hot to read. I do hope that there will be more stories to come. Each sentence and chapter kept getting hotter and more enjoyable.

Fantastic story, wish I could find a woman, like that. Wish all families could be that way, no divorce no shame, only love.

I must ask is this just a fantacy, or is a real life experience. Not judging, my dream is my mother

Great read, but it really sucks that it is just fantasy. It is the only true progression of a man, to bed his mother. This should never be taboo, but should be embarrassed...a mother makes a man.

Absolutely loved the whole story.