All Comments on 'Hard To Learn # 301'

if who ever wrote this shit thinks its writing .. maybe he is brainwashed.... me a white man watch a black man fuck my wife for whatever reason lol ... now that is a crock ... first of all he would never fuck again ... hell he wouldnt eat sleep or move ... a black baby lol no but hell no id kill the bastard .. ever hear of sudden infant death ... and thats only if it wasnt aborted f9rst ... and if the wife couldnt explain it id kill her also .... but if i found where drugs were involved ... heaven help the bastard who did it as id tie his dick and balls off tight enough till they actually rotted off ...if it didnt kill him ...who thinks a black man would be smart enough to do this even if possible ..... he would get it started and boom say something t othe wrong person and get his head shot off lol ... then no more plan .... i think you as a writer need to move into the realm of fantasy instead ... gee what a crock .... and hell my dick is bigger than yours anyway if all you have is ten inches grow up guy and smell the white mans cum as you swallow his big juicy load lol .. that makes about as much sense

I have known a lot of black men and women in my life. Only one

was like this Jerome. He specialized in blue eyed blondes,

and I mean real knockouts. But he played pro ball and was

...well, sort of like OJ Simpson. Very nice looking, articulate and fun to be around. He and I were friends for

many years, until I lost track of him, but the ladies I know,

who were "with" him are both angry now. They told me he just

used them for sex and money. My opinion is that the sex was

totally mutual, so the ladies get no points there. But he

really did soak them for some bucks. These two ladies do

not know each other, so they could not have coordinated their stories.

That said, I also know a lot more black guys who are married

to black women and have a good family life.

So Jerome may be the exception, but I have a daughter who

lived with her mom, got pregnant while in college. The guy

told her he was...uh...not black.....but Jamaican. Our

grandaughter is a beautiful mix, but her life is NOT fun.

She told me she is shunned by both races and is not happy.

She is very, very intelligent (as is my daughter if you measure life in pure IQ, but my daughter is like her mom,

NO COMMNON SENSE).

So when these people try to tell you the children of a mixed

marriage are fine...I don't know, but I know one who is

real angry with her mom.

These comments are NOT intended to be inflamatory, but educational. I was talking to a deputy here in town about

the gangs, etc. the other day and he say young men..black,

white, purple will try to seduce your daughters, while an

older guy videotapes it. THEN they blackmail the girl into

other, worse acts. If you think this is just BS, go talk to

your local law enforcement.

I can tell you my black friends (male) are very concerned

about their image and they take their families across town

to black churches. Yeah, they live in a predominantly white

area, but they want their daughter to date black boys, so

they keep her involved in that church. Their daughter is a

knock-out, she can pick from any race, hell their will be

Martians here for her. But HER BLACK parents want her to

marry a black boy. I am fine with that, whatever works.

There are enough predators out there we parents should help

each other out, because the bad guys seem to be gaining on

us.

I want my baby back. This is poorly written. It seems like the author has a fifth grade education or English is a second language. Perhaps ebonics or white trash is his first language. Or he is just stupid. It is supposed to be Lisa’s story but is not told that way. Breed and bred are confused, but he did stop using bread, so we should appreciate his learning curve. Get an editor or take up coloring. Where the hell did you get the term ‘Hard to Learn’? In the trailer park, or the hood?

The writer may not be able to spell very well but he writes one hell of a good fucking story. And the people who blast him always do it without putting their names in the e-mails. Scared to leave their names? I wonder why? Perhaps they just want to bitch like a little girl about a great story they could never write! Well I say fuck them Needyou! Keep this going it's one hell of a good story, just like all of yours are!

What a bunch of crapola. It's a darn shame that you spent a significant amount of time on this story, but posted it without fine tuning it. Get an editor

Well, you have let out enough rope to hang ten of you by now. Look, constructively, you do have some talent but the subjects you write about are poorly chosen - have you thought about that? Do you know your audience yet? I see you changing to some degree but can't understand why no editor yet??? If you truly intend to get stronger as a writer why the hesitation?

Subject wise, consider 3somes with some balance and fairness, swinging likewise, if cheating spouse then no awareness on mates part - if there comes awareness then life's realities says there will be some consequence. These themes can be erotic and sensual as well as entertaining - arousing - which is why we normals (non-sickies) come here to read.

Give it some thought and we know you aren't stupid - not even close to it - you are a good imaginative writer - just a fair tactician or planner, but just a poor chooser of themes and no editor to help you (words, spelling and content)- get over it and get some help to improve. Think about it - consider the possibilities - you could be very good if you dismiss the pride and get some help - regards

this is not the normal type of story for me. Not a raciest but I hate to sex females of any race used, their life, hope and dreams ruined. Their family hurt, I hope this story has revenge for the ones who ruin these women lifes. and maybe some closer and and great love for the married couples....maybe some can over come this.... If that dose not happen this is going to be one sad sad story

this is not the normal type of story for me. Not a raciest but I hate to sex females of any race used, their life, hope and dreams ruined. Their family hurt, I hope this story has revenge for the ones who ruin these women lifes. and maybe some closer and and great love for the married couples....maybe some can over come this.... If that dose not happen this is going to be one sad sad story

Interesting story line on the laced water causing increased sex drive and eventual blackmail over the wife's head. How would you control the white male and make him into a cuckold to garner his wealth? It is an amusing theory and the depth you go into to explain what is happening is appreciated. Will you turn some of the submissive white males into transvestites and have them prostitute for the cause or is just taking all he has enough? Wondering how you are going to weave this or together or does it go to quick digest ending.

Good imagination. This story had some real promise until you mentioned that it was a work of non fiction. I just can't believe that. I was even forgiving the spelling until I read that.

You should finish this though and tell us what happened to Missy and how Lisa got out of this predicament.

Here you are, vesting a large amount of time and energy--- yours in writing it ours in reading it--- and the dynamics of a narrative escape you. Plausibility, character foundations, back stories, plot twists... 101 and 201 haven't shown an evoloution of either the plot/ idea OR its execution and I don't think there is anyone here (at least, I HOPE there isn't) that actually sees this as "non-fiction". More probable is that your pitch about it being non-fiction is exactly that, part of the pitch, a plot device to put the readers on edge and I say that only to try and give you SOME credit as a writer because otherwise you really are running on empty.

Biggotry isn't sexy, and you're confused if you think that theme alongside gross stereotypes is what "interracial" relationships are about. Have you ever actually known a "mixed couple"? Do you actually know anything about black people that you haven't seen on MTV? Maybe you should try reading BEFORE you try writing, or maybe this isn't quite the place for a rascist agenda...

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