All Comments on 'Harley Girl'

Another great story from you. I enjoyed reading it. I'm so glad that these two got together and lived "happily ever after".

With the flood of material being released under your name the quality is not all even, but this is one of your better efforts.

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Great story!

Lukas

Several small editing errors (put vs but, etc), but overall a very well done story. I would have slowed it down some, and not had them fall in love the first night, but it works well this time round. Great job.

This was another of your good ones. It is really fast paced and fast moving. Plot was very good, characters were well handled, and in true romance fashion it had a happy ending. Nice job. Thank you for sharing this with us

Grey Eagle:

You've told a wonderful tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I usuallt don't like to read stories about doctors-- except robin cook-- because they invariably make bloopers.

what I found unique about this story was that you mentioned about the VERY STRICT RULE that doctors have against getting involved with patients.

good work keep it up.

Iam so happy for savanna the last part of the second chapter

had me awed when he woke up from his nightmare of dreaming that savanna would leave him but she said she burned her face but in the first part of the story she said she lost her face in a motorcyle accident why the change in how she got disfigured herself?

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Thanks. Enjoyed the story. PAPATOAD

I know where You come from with this story. I ,Myself, Know what it is like...having lost 3/4 of my left leg in a "Hit-And-Run" Accident on my motorcycle. Which I know now was "Planed"

I will never know "Who-or-Why" I can only guess that it was a "Red-Neck" that a hard-on for "Motorcyclist"

Ken

...but I'm all sticky with the gallons of honey.

Great story!!!

Not bad, but no tension. Never a doubt what would happen.

That the both shared the experience was priceless - he was as haunted as she was and knew how to fix it and so he did.

Too bad about the sister she never stood a chance with him - or any other single guy - oh well - good luck grow up lol.

Really nice work - thanks so much for it -

Great story... Guess your fingers flew across the keyboard... Otherwise I loved it and you are one of my favorite authors

You be the judge, the author can't seem to get it right.