All Comments on 'Harnessing Fire Ch. 01'

something about is this story is captivating and i love it

im liking where this going. keep it coming

i'm really enjoying this so far. please keep it coming.

I like this plot. I hope that she will be able to keep some 'fire' other than the physical and challenge him a bit. It would suck if she just submitted to him completely.

I'm six years late to the party but I hope this comment finds you. For a first chapter this is great. The world you've created makes me want to come back and read more which is definitely a good sign. I also think the plot you've laid out is unique enough to give your story that extra spark. I'm very interested in learning what happens to Tania in the next few chapters