by AutumnWriter
This series is continually pleasant, and the writing flows smoothly. I encourage you to continue with it.
It's amazing how your protagonists have matured through your story and writing, I can feel their journey, like Jim and Hildy have come alive.
Thanks.
The characters are maturing and the trip is well detailed. We can not help but to root for them... I note that he promised that Hildy would be the first person he would tell about the Douglas, but instead of calling her immediately, he put Rich and his parents ahead of her. That does not augur well....