Haunted Prey Ch. 01

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Lindsay shook his head ruefully as he turned on his heels, intent on returning to his condo. There was no longer any wind; the air was still and as he retreated, it became stale and cloying. The realization only made him walk faster. He had no idea what Alexis was trying to do, but he wanted no part of it.

He only wanted to be alone.

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So, I'm back at it again. I hope you guys enjoyed and I am very much looking forward to your feedback. Please comment!

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shortydeeshortydeeabout 12 years ago
Love !!!!!

at first sound, way cool!

pmpktypmpktyabout 13 years ago
confused

I was pretty good with part 1 because only a few brothers were mentioned, and then part 2 came and it got a bit confusing, now with part 3 there is another brother and I'm not sure I can make it through. Is there any way you can provide a list of the brothers with a small description?

shortydeeshortydeeabout 13 years ago
Great

I know that I have read the stories before, but I am very glad that I started over again. Last time I missed out on a lot. I hope that somewhere along tha way you will bring NADIA back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
no fair!

wheres nadia!?? i want nadia bac!!!!!!:(

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ooh, spooky.

lindsay is a weird name for a guy, but it's original. i have a feeling that nadia is guiding him via messages in the wind.

sunshinesdevotionsunshinesdevotionover 14 years ago
beginings... again

Good first chapter... who's playing the music? I can't wait to see what's up with Lindsay and how his character develops.... I tried not bto be like this but I wanted to say that I am still just devastated over the last story... poor D! I was tempted to not read anymore but its just so good!! I hope she comes back. I am a happy ending kind of girl!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
oh please pretty please

bring NADIA back... love the beginning of this story... but pls bring nadia & d back together...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yippee, you're back with the brothers.

I am so glad that you have decided to write another story. I have regularly been checking this site for the next instalment and can't wait to learn more about Lindsay and what Alexis meant.

Keep it up and looking forward to the next part. (Hopefully don't have to wait too long :-) )

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome!

Love it.

I just wish life would let you write more!

michassmichassover 14 years ago
Nadia's soul in oldest brother?

What was it that Nadia told Alexis in private? And why do his eyes glow?

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