All Comments on 'Haunted Prey Ch. 06'

Definitely worth waiting for :)

Glad to see more of this. It's fun to see Lindsay navigating the relationship minefield.

This was a great chapter and i love Lindsey. The twists are interesting that your automatically hooked *chuckles* which is one of the best thing i love about your stories.

Keep up the great work..

Thank You for the post.

Enjoying the story and looking forward to the next chapters.

can't wait for the next chapter!

Okay, he redeemed himself after that terrible first date. Nice touch with the mac 'n' cheese. Now I am craving for some, lol. Btw, maybe I missed something but Draco died?! How did that happen? Thanks for writing.

I love these two as much as I love(d) Nadia and Andrae! I can almost see them walking the streets as a happy couple. Just don't kill either of them. LOL. Thanks for writing! <3 Lily.

Finally we are getting into the meat of the story!! Who is Raife? What's his history with Lindsay? (Love the name by the way) what do they have planned for Aluria?

i love a good "knight in shining armor" story.

I don't think its slow, its the gradual buildup thats making it a good story, I have also noticed that the stories get better with each one...not so rushed.

I have not read the Bretheran books by Shayla Black but I have wondered if you are the one and the same...I know that some of the other erotic authors, i.e. from Ellora's Cave, have submitted stories to Literotica and eventually became published...? I am sad to see that you do not have any more submissions after this story...I would love to read more about the brothers...Thanks

I am very happy that you worked Lindsay into a story, I hope that he will take home to his brothers.

i really hope she gets to meet the family! and i hope even more that my very energetic boys give me to time to merge my mind into the world you are creating in my mind. Googled the Pagani! AWESOME :D x Nix