All Comments on 'He Controls His Step-Daughter'

Please tell me there will be more!

Keep writing!

I enjoyed it...it was hot...but make a note to read the story before submitting it...there were atleast 3 typos in the first 2 paragraphs

I like the way James brings Marie 'down' sort of humbles her with his control of the situation... yum. Next time a little penetration!

that was thrilling! well written. tension, fear, longing.

well done!

Hope you write more about this........the step dad sounds soooooooooo hot! Would love for him to fuck me.....

I enjoyed it and how he took control of her.

Please write a sequel that was the hottest story I have ever read!