All Comments on 'Heart of the Wolf Ch. 05'

I'm enjoying your story and look forward to reading more chapters. Thank you for sharing.

I check everday. More please. I'm hooked. eve3514

A ugh really? You sure know how to leave us hanging...In a good way. More please this story is fantastic. ..If not longer

I'm enjoying your story...Thank You!

Story is good, only one thing putting me off. You nod your head for yes and shake your head for no. On more than one occasion you have had her shake her head for yes and once nod her head for no. A small something i know but it is a bit of putting.

Please continue

Excellent story but chapter should b longer

Waiting fr more of it

I really do love it more and more every story. Can't wait for the next part. :) Keep it the great work.

Oh my I love this story I can't wait for more I find myself checking several times a day to see if another part is up!!!!

Catie is reacting better then expected.

What is happening with that monster that raped Catie?

Loving your story PLUS the fact that you're a regular updater. S2

7!@

becoming on of my favorite wolf stories. It is well written, not rushed and most of all sweet. I will let you know that when I came on Lit and saw that you had submitted another chapter, I smiled and got excited. You didn't disappoint. I just hope that you do give us a full explanation as to why catie's wolf was hiding. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter......

I love this series so much. I check everyday to see if u added anew chapter.

As a person who is partial to wolves in the first place this story is really intriguing, I appreciate you keeping the updates forthcoming. And I really appreciate your imagination and dealing with this subject.

N.D.

Having read this entire series I am sorry to say that the story has lost me. I was wishing this wouldn't be another alpha finds mate, but I was wrong. When you through the rape into the mix I thinking you were going to drag the heroin through the hell of being a survivor and finally finding love, but you have bailed on that. The only thing that could keep my interest would be if they turned out to be brother and sister, so they could fight with their inner wolf.

need more

I'm afraid I agree with bokhun8614. Unfortunately, werewolf stories are being milked for all they're worth. They're not so fresh anymore unless you have one hell of a twist. Also--I mean, I know this is a story about mythical creatures, but for the sake of verisimilitude... The girl was raped and beaten up just a few days beforehand, right? She's doing unbelievably well, isn't she? Like, when those boys were trying to make moves on her, she didn't have a single flashback or moment of panic or anything... Hrm.

Good luck, though, and keep writing!

I just found this, but dear I love it. :) I hope to see more soon.

Please i want to find out how it ends, its almost as if you have me by the balls so to speak.