All Comments on 'Hearts of the Sky Intertwine Ch. 01'

This is and the previous story are wonderful. I love how you jumped ahead a few years unfolding their childrens tale, yet left clues to tell the parents story. Nicely done. Thank you. Please keep the characters true, and stand firm. A fine, fine beginning. Mostera1

Thank you for your comment. i do intend to continue writing about Lehiel and Azurina. and i am glad that one of my favorite authours has read my story.

You have written a story which I like very much and hope you write the next chapter soon. Well done

good start hope you continue on