All Comments on 'Hearts of Warriors Ch. 07'

I love you oh so much!

what an excellent chapter i can not believe how good it was please post the next chapter as soon as you possible can you have shown once again why you are always at the tops of the non human category you truly are a very talented story teller

It feels like I read through this chapter in under 10 minutes. The clock tells me that's not the case.. but it just demonstrates that I can never get enough of your writing. I wish I could make your life settle down some, you're such a talented writer and I selfishly need more.

Please don't take my comment as a complaint, it is whole heartedly meant as a compliment to your abilities. At least with the slowed posting, maybe you're less likely to have burnout. That would be so much worse, then we would have none of your awesomeness at all.

Wow...

What more is there to say....except, can't wait for the next chapter!

Love this chapter!

Very cool how Kallum found the compound, that ability makes sense for the Alpha of their inner pack to have. So was that in there originally, or did you add it based on the question I tweeted after reading the preview?

Looking forward to more!

did you have to give me another bloody cliffhanger you know how fond I am of them!!!! Can't wait for more though. LOL

You are Hell on my nerves, Jaz. You cannot keep doing this to me! I swear to God, if I have to endure one more cliffhanger, I am going to scream.

Mac is going to be pissed! Please update soon! I check this story everyday!!!!

Beautiful...............

Damn!

I cannot wait! I need to know what it going happen.

But, why did Karn have to call Mac?

After all, the situation was contained without any further problems. And Lily is making progress, she managed to keep herself from shifting just by thinking of him.

Please Jaz, update soon!

Wow! I think we've established that your stories make my heart race in dangerous levels, but if I die, then at least I die happy and all I can think of after I've finished is that I'm so glad I get too live another day in hope of reading what comes next.

Eternal groupie zooey

P.S. yes I know it was corny, but I can't help it!

It made my weekend when i saw a new posting. Great as always can't wait to see more. Hmmm I'm curious to see who you're going to pair up with Brandon.

Such a great chapter! I love the way this is developing. I can't wait for more.

Oh, and Karn is a bad a**.

the next chapter better be up soon or I just might start biting and howling at the moon

just gets better and better

Thank God Mac is coming back and not going to europe, we need Mac-Lily action, i can't wait to read the next chapter! please don't make us wait so long again, it's torture!!

Jaz you rock!!!

Wonderful as always, well worth the initial SQUEE when I heart it had been submitted lol

wokay its good as usual - nee

Waiting is torture, but worth it! Absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. Wonderful work, yet again.

Jaz,

I love, love, love your writing! But you're killing me! No more personal life or family visits for you until we readers say so! No more Niece's with super cute 2yo, rambunctious daughters occupying your time! We need your brilliant mind focused on OUR needs! We NEED more chapters immediately! Hehehe jk! Ok only partially kidding! You never fail to make the wait worth it! Do whatever you need to keep your muse, musing. LOL. @JDPolsley

pretty much says it all. Now that Dad has somewhat calmed down. Well as much as either Romanov twin can truly be calm when they don't get their way. I love both Andrei and Alexi, there are no "Hotter" vamp twins. And Lily Romanov defiantly got her stubborn streak from her father. And although it looks like she sees something she likes and just goes after it, that isn't so. All of the thought and planning she put into getting close to her mate, that was no rush plan. But my new favorite Romanov is Kallum.

The moment Kallum said that Caleb and Annie were like a 2nd set of parents to all the Varcolac as well as the Alpha's children, well that was all it took to make him my new favorite Romanov. Without the strong characters that Caleb and Annie are this story would be nothing. Back to Kallum. He seems to have a deep understanding of not just who everyone is but also how they fit into the pack and extended pack life. He has an inner strength that allows him to put his "Alpha" on the back burner when dealing w/other Alphas. And most of all he wants for the pack what he wants for his sister. To have the comfort and protection to lead a normal life without fear. But also because of his love for Elina and now the love he feel thru his connection w/Lily to her mate, I think he wants this feeling to be experienced for everyone. Right now he just has to help Lily and the other Varcolac. Ahhhhhhhhhh the Romanov's

Jaz as usual you've left me sighing at the amazig characters you come up with... Loved this chapter as well as every other fragment that comes out of that brain of yours. Elina with Karn or Lily's friend... ??? Great job friend

I was doing my homework like a good girl when I happened to get on twittter and notice everyone talkin about the new chapter. Needless to say, I hopped on the net and surfed over to read. I love it! You are one of my fave authors and if you published I would def buy.

I like the fact that the vąrcolac are gonna be seen as adults (hopefully lol) and I absolutely love that Karn put Mac in his place.

Another great chapter, and I can hardly wait for the next one (even if it means delaying homework and writing).

You are a fantastic writer. You are one of the best authors on this site. I love the FTI series. Your characters are so relatable and realistic. This story is awesomely addictive. You already know this. Please-----Keep writing and I'll keep reading. FBThomas

I could have sworn there was a fourth page... Where did it go?! Sigh... I suppose I'll have to wait for the next chapter, like everyone else. Awesome as usual :-)

Your writing rocks!!!

... for reading another chapter the day it came out. now i have to wait again! you are such an amazing writer! can't wait (literally) for the next chapter!

I have read all your stories. I love them. Sorry that I am not always diligent enought to vote. Please continue. I wait impatiently for the next installment.

Thank you, Ganna

Your writing skills are kick ass.

I was disappointed it was so short but satisfied nonetheless. :)

Im interested in learning more about Liam and Elina's struggles as well.

This was not nearly as good as your last chapter. Lily keeps overreacting and frankly its annoying. If you want us to understand her emotions then you have to build it up a bit more. Also, i don't understand why Andrei would go crazy when he finds out where Lily is. I mean, she's in the heart of the organization that has been set up to protect her, why would his protective instincts kick in? There's just too many plot holes where you're going. You were doing so well. Think it through more.

I am surprised that the Alpha in Kallum didn't control Lily's outburst. It looks like she may have a serious problem!

I cant see these supposed plot holes myself, but everyone see's things differently i guess. As someone who's had to find a common ground with her own father im looking forward to the scene with andrei and lily coming to terms with whats happened and why. Glad to see macs not going anywhere either, that was a niggly worry in the back of my head. And oooh, was it just coincidence that lily comments on brandons single status just before we get to hear of elina's need of support and the likelihood of her coming to camp?! Hehe i love speculating after a new chapter :) thanks as always for sharing!

PS is there any chance u could publish a list somewher of which varcolac goes with which parent and in what order...i keep getting it all muddled :(

Another great chapter Jazz!

Write the next one fast please :)

No holes I see, you are superb and surprise us more o superb writer :)

KARN HAS REALIZED THE PROBLEM, MAC NEEDS TO MATE LILY, OR HER WOLF HALF IS GOING TO GO FERAL, THE REASON KAL COULD NOT STOP THE PROBLEM IS HIS PROMISE TO MAC, NO "ALPHA" SHIT, IF HE USED IT, HE WOULD HAVE TO CONTINUE DOING SO, THUS BREAKING A PROMISE TO MAC. AND I MAY BE WRONG, BUT I THINK I SEE A MATE FOR ELINA IN BRANDON, AND AS FOR LILY'S FATHER, HE HAS NEVER BEEN THE MOST REASONABLE OF THE VAMPIRES WHY SHOULD HE CHANGE NOW, BUT IF MAC MATES LILY, HE JUST MIGHT CALM A LITTLE, NOT MUCH, BUT A LITTLE

I love u jaz!! When i saw ur newest post it was the best feeling ever!! I couldnt stop squealing n smiling!! :-) it was the besy surprise ever!! Love u heaps n heaps, ur writing brings so much joy to me n many other readers :-) im so glad that i stumbled upon ur stories few yrs bac :-) thank you so much for ur dedication n time to write these beautiful n enchanting stories. I really appreciate it :-) i miss the times when u used to post regularly n would surprise us with extra chapters on special occasions but we all know life is not a straight road, sometimes boom boom pows pops up like a darn zit. So i can only hope that u wont make us wait so long that ants ran away with our pants! :-)

Dont stress, good luck n lots, heaps, mountains of love :-) from Liz

great chapter, loving the twists and turns.

Even though he's only has had a couple of mentions, Kothari is the one character I can't wait to be properly introduced to! Captivating chapter as always. Keep them coming :)

WOW!

*****

Omg Jazz keep them coming I check everyday just about to see if there is a new chapter this world you have created has become so real to me I can't wait for the others to find their mates im just so excited I think im gonna go crazy waiting for the next one please hurry thanks for all your hard work <3<3<3<3<3<3

***Great as ALWAYS!*** You are so very talented. You're world of vamps and weres gives me a fun place to go to in my time off from my studying and school. Thanks for the good read Jaz...I appreciate it.

The story moves along, excellent pacing and well written as always.

Another chapter, yay! I can't wait to 'meet' all the rest of them. I'm glad that you actually explained what happened with Elina and didn't just leave us guessing (so many authors do that and leave it for a while when it doesn't do anything for plot development and it's so frustrating). I hope everything's going to be ok in Scotland now that Mac has to come back, lol.

I check this site every day <----- thats true.. this story is great!!! this world you've created is great !!!! keep the updates coming!!!!the faster the better!!!!!

i need more! that was such a tease! i'm hooked!

and who or WHAT their mates are. You are killing me softly with these wonderful vamp/were tales, and I just can't get enough! I always want more. I am greedy right? :) Keep up the fantastic work.

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Such a great chapter!!!!!

Another great chapter. I was also wondering if a list could be done of which kid/s belong to which parents and their ages? It would help me a lot!

I definitely think its time Mac and Lily sorted their sh*t out, the build up has been good but I fear it could get repetitive as I've not really noticed a strong reason for Mac's resistance (so give in already!). I am also keen to find out who goes to Edinburgh in his place thus opening up another storyline....woohoo!

This is sooo great! Please post another chapter soon!!!

Before I knew it My 7 chapters where done with. I love reading this cause it's not that slam fuck fest so, thank you for the build up of romance. For the continuation of the other characters from the other stories while offering something new. Can't wait for the next ch. to be posted.

Thank you for another great chapter. If that "torture" is the norm it is a wonder that Annie isn't misbehaving on a regular basis to receive Caleb's discipline.;)

You have to free Elina from her vow to shield Liam from emotions. A little seven year old girl foregoing all joy and happiness is cruel and far too great of a burden to bear. I have faith you will right this wrong and even put a positive twist into your solution.

You are the BEST!!

In response to Saori's inquiry about kids and parents, the following is a summary from my notes. I do not track ages.

Hope this helps.:)

Hearts of Warriors

Anakatrine, aka Rhianna, Ancient Vampire - Triumvirate

Callain, aka Caleb, Ancient Vampire - Triumvirate

No Children

Guardian, Ancient Vampire - Triumvirate

Rayne, Werecat, Daytons friend and a Varcolac for long time

Kothari, Varcolac (Sense emotions, Talk W/ thought, Shift to animal, Mask scent, Invisible)

Rafe, adopted brother of Jared Hanlon

Lacey, Jennifer Swifts best friend

Aaron and Ben

Jared Hanlon, Alpha Werewolf

Millie

No Children

Aaron Alexander, Werewolf

Jennifer Swift, Laceys best friend

DJ, Thorne and Rowan

Demetri Bozic, Vampire, age 2000

Mara, Werewolf

No Children

Alexi Romanov, Vampire

Cedar Alexander, Werewolf

Dara, Varcolac (Sense emotions, Talk W/ thought, Shift to animal, Mask scent) Varco Pack Soldier

Cassia, Varcolac (Sense emotions, Talk W/ thought, Shift to animal, Mask scent) Varco Pack Soldier

Andrei Romanov, Vampire

Loretta, Werewolf

Kallum, Varcolac (Sense emotions, Talk W/ thought, Mask scent, Track those with bond) Varco Pack Alpha

Lilianna Rose, aka Andrea Ruminskey, Varcolac (Sense emotions, Talk W/ thought, Mask scent) Kallum's Protector

Lilys mate is Mackenzie, leader of Praetorians, guardians of Varcolac.

Macs first family killed, Wife Maria & Daughter Sophie

Nors Erikson, Vampire

Ashleigh Bryant, Werewolf

Liam, Varcolac (Sense emotions, Talk W/ thought, Invisible) The Heart of the Varco Pack

Dayton Alexander, Werewolf, (First Mate Faith broke neck running)

Freya Erikson, Vampire

Elina, Varcolac (Liams protector)

@werefan - isn't mara a vampire too and not a werewolf?

i wonder who kallum's mate will be...he seems such a perfect person to be a mate to...

hopefully in the next chapters, a little bit more of the personalities of the varcolac will be mentioned...i'd like to do a little speculation of my own on who mates who LOL

the pace is a bit slow for me only bec i got used to more frequent postings from before...in any case, i'll patiently wait for you always

Mara Fitzgerald is a Vampire. Good Catch:)

Sorry for the confusion.

As always it has me trapped within it's lines.

To "Anonymous" who posted it's full of plotholes i suggest reading the back story. If you still see plot holes then i'd suggest you aren't understanding the characters.

I can't wait for Mac and Lilly to get together... talk about a tease...

Jared and Millie have children. It was just before Rafe formed the new pack I think and I cannot remember which chapter but it was when Cedar and "Rose" and the others were coming to terms with their vampire mates I think. I would have to go back and search. It's been awhile since I read it and there are so many good characters to track.

are called Alicia and Mena :)

and post the next chapter, waiting is driving me insane, it's been 10 days for god sake! ;p

I have spent the last few days re-reading the entire series. I guess you could call it an addiction. I have enjoyed every story that is on your page. The way you have changed the way we see the kids a sign of just how talented you are. Gone is the adorable little ones running and playing with each other and in their place we find new things to love about each one. Also really glad that Mac is not getting away so easily. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Great Job!!!

Sherrylee

I feel so sory for Lilly - please give us a new chapter soon! BTW we are four ladies in Sweden, Denmark and Norway loving your stories, so you are truly a writer with an international group of fans.

your work is just brilliant...please post ur next chapter. its been sooo long. m geting desperate here coz m addicted to ur writting.its more then 10 days now.... take pity

One good thing about going away for a while is that there's more chapters available for me to read when I come back! Yay me!

i know it is going to happen in an explosive color mixture. Mac keeps trying to push away and Lily keeps coming... and when they get together and he stops fighting it will be an awesome thing i know it will... I cant wait to read more!:)

Go Karn!!!

I don't understand. She did control her wolf. Why did Karn intimate that she was uncontrollable? I'm confused...

He could have just used his command tone to order her down?

Maybe because the only person who can make Lily's inner wolf submit has been Mac

I have to say that I like how you make your supernaturals so realistic. They have to sleep, and they get tired exercising. I don't like to make this comparison, but it's not like Twilight (thank goodness for that!) where they don't need to sleep and I'm pretty sure the only reason she has them drinking blood is because they wouldn't be vampires without that.

I'm guessing he doesn't quite know how to use/direct it as a command, or it isn't ready to show itself yet.

the command tone only works for those he shares an alpha bond with, HIS pack, and Jaz has only hinted at him having a pack so far. Basically, Kal's alpha abilities haven't awakened yet.

Kal's Alpha instincts are very much awake. He has a mini pack that he controls - The Volcaric - but around others he has learnt control and knows when others wiser than him need to step up. That makes him stronger and fiercer than all other Alpha's. Which is why both Caleb and Mac trusted him. It is just that the mating pull is stronger than an Alpha pull until they are bonded.