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All Comments on 'Hearts on Fire Ch. 01'

by EBaillar18

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Evil AlpacaEvil Alpacaover 19 years ago
A good beginning

Even though the sexual aspect is yet to come, I thought there's a lot of potential here. This intro is very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
SOMETHING THERE???

GOOD START FOR A STORY BUT THAT IS ALL IT IS A START.

RON

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