All Comments on 'Heat of the Moment'

Ok so the first line is about a lover and the tease is about 2 guys in mindless fucking. That does not compute genius nor does the fantasy with reality of gay sex. Where was the screaming? Where was the physical? Where is the mention of the stink of feces dick?

The sex you write about is what straight people do. So what are you a closet straight guy hiding behind being a queer?

Ignore the ignorant anonymous, why is he reading your story? You wrote a hot, invigorating story, Thanks!

Considering we are all fiction writers, there are the little details left to make any situation more palatable for our readers. This was mentioned in the one idiotic comment by another person. However, you did a good job in getting the action going and keeping me interested. I would have like to see more details regarding the sensations. Some extra sensory images would have made this even better.

The dirty talk was definitely a bonus here!

Uh....guys...the description clearly said "porn without plot" who gives a damn if its realistic or not, if you want realistic pay attention to what the title is and find something you like.

I find romance in this story. I believe the idea of two wanting each other so badly is romantic itself, in a way. I enjoyed this ! The visuals and dialogue were very pleasing, mhmmmm, pleasing enough for me to want to read more of their sex. I know this was porn without plot but hey I enjoyed it enough to be interested their plot =]