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by Sascha_I

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greykisnegreykisneabout 15 years ago
Good Start

Thought the story was becoming very hot, then it ended abruptly. Would like to see the story line continued. I'm really into sexy Latinos !

Calit69Calit69about 15 years ago
Sizzle to fizzle

Good intentions , not necessarily graphic enough with the trio, reasonble development of the characters although a bit of a mix up with the names in massaging early on. All seemed to come to a quick and unexpected ending

Sascha_ISascha_Iabout 15 years agoAuthor
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Heh thanks to the both of you :) I'll admit this was an odler story. I'll have new material soon enough!

Oh yeah I can dig latin men too btw... ;)

Whiskey11Whiskey11about 15 years ago
Hot!

Thought this was very hot, but would like to see more. More stories please! :)

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I am Sascha Illyvich, paranormal romance author and I started writing 20 years ago. My erotic romances have been listed under the Night Owl Romance and Road to Romance's Recommended read list, as well nominated for the CAPA. Torn to Pieces, my paranormal menage romance was ...