All Comments on 'Heather in the Highlands Pt. 01'

Welcome to Literotica and thank you for sharing this wonderfully HOT story with us - what an entrance!

You really MUST bring us lots more - and you may have five stars as a little incentive!

I might have been erotic but it was so drawn out that I lost interest,

You have to keep the reader on edge and not lose them.

I'm shivering with anticipation. Loving it! On to the next chapter....

in my opinion this is perfect , the long slow build up to the bondage , & spookys

adds to the anticipation . is like a long slow drum roll / a crescendo .

great story , wonderful protagonists , very fine plot , perfectly weighted .

ty muchly

i dived in & did not come up for air until the end .

totaly lost track of time ...

can understand this isn't to everyone's likeing

it being in the BDSM category would explain why it don't float some pples boat.

for me this is more of a Ghostly Romance , with a side of bondage & restraint.

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver

An excellent story so far. I can picture this area as I have been there, not to Claggan Castle but that area. Just the right amount of erotica mixed with passion, fetish and love. Brilliant.

Thank you for writing.

John.