All Comments on 'Heather Likes to Be Watched'

I loved the in the dark scene. The idea of Hank just coming without quite knowing quite where was very good. I think, though, rushing on to actual intercourse was a shame. You could have done much more with Heather and Hank just playing around.

Good point. The end was a bit rushed. I am working on another one and maybe I will revise this in the meantime

The fucking of a wife's sister is soooo fantastic, once is great TWICE in unbelievable, the then second sister is out of this world....LOVE THE STORY...let's have more...

It feels to me like the two sisters are trying to get something on the husband for a divorce or something? I just get that feeling. The sister sounds very hot. Maybe I'm imagining things.

you must have been really excited to mention "her cock" and "his cunt juices". I know it's hard to type with one hand while the other one is busy elsewhere! Gave it 5 stars 'cause it gave me an erection. Hope they're not setting him up for a divorce but rather scheming to get him into a sister sandwich. Amy and Heather have been mutual box lickers and have dreamed of this for a while.

I gave you 5 stars because you deserve it. It is unusually well written for someone with a limited history of stories here. Looking forward to more !

Clearly, the first thing you do when screwing your wife's sister is to take photographs.

Please write some more

My clit is tingling from these stories!! I love the plot!! Keep them coming!

Thanks for all the comments everyone. Here is the latest, more coming:

http://www.literotica.com/s/heathers-boat-ride

Here is the latest chapter:

http://www.literotica.com/s/heather-fucks-while-hank-watches

"He took each pair of panties and rubbed them over his cock, making sure to leave a dab of his own cum right on the crotch of each one for when Heather put them on."

I would be in a state of perpetual horniness at the thought of my BF doing this.

"Hank got out his phone and began taking pictures of her cock entering her, pulling out wet from his cunt juices, then back in." - Plot twist

A sheila calling her vagina a “ cunt “ or referring to her cum as cunt juices is a major turn on for me !!! I have a suspicion that everything is not quite as Hank would believe , I think his wife is in on what Heather is doing .