by Control_Master_
control egg thing can be fun at a resturant especially if there is more than the two of you and you can pass the remote around under the table .Watching the girl try not to cum and scream is a blast.
Obviously, there is a 'Loving' Wife in this tale, but her marital status is minor (call by Dom to Hubby) compared to the main focus of the story. I agree that BDSM reflects the story much better (and would likely increase the rating by 2 or more points.) The author is also very careless with (or ignorant of) basic English spelling, such as 'peak' for 'peek' (an earlier homophone error was inadvertently ambiguous, and I enjoyed the alternative interpretation). I'm pretty sure a 'good' Dom would have her accept the supper service in heels (only)! The closer you get to a Sub's limit (without exceeding it), the tighter the bond becomes, and she was (relatively) sassy several times earlier - and I would make sure she was told that the indignity imposed was due to her earlier displays of independence!
Sounded more like a Loving Wife Story to me than BDSM ...I guess my version of
BDSM is alot more PAINFUL....This was just submitting to pleasure... I also thought it was well written..
At least post this crap in the right category so no one needs to read it.
I know the couple asked him to master them. But this wasn't with both of their consents, thereby he made her cheat on husband. Sorry, but a true master thinks of his subs first. It would have been appropriate for him to call husband first, even though both are subs? Sounds like he just wanted a duck.