All Comments on 'Heather's Shoe Shop Exposure'

It's a real gem. Can't wait to see what Rachel has in mind for Heather... Maybe they'll try shoes... Thanks

Very nice, I hope you write more about these two.

Christi

Brilliant story. Thoroughly enjoyed it

Hi As I was reading your story, my pussy became very wet and my nipples were hard as rocks. My girlfriend heard my moaning and immediately became concerned. She saw what I was reading and pinched my nipples and then got down on her knees and stated to kiss my pussy. I can't tell you how great that felt especially after I had a very intense orgasm. GIRL ON GIRL SEX IS THE BEST!!!!!

Molly

I emailed this one for my wife to read..

I really enjoyed this. You can feel the tension building as the two women slowly strip and tease each other. More!

Verygood story. If you choose to write more, i would be able to proofread foryou.

-Alex

I love your stuff !!! I am going to send this to my ex-last girl friend who has decided that she is a late onset Lesbian. I do miss her ... it would be nice to be back in her scope. Who knows maybe her current girlfriend will warm up to me and let me in ...

Love the polar opposite of the pants and the very short skirt! Would love to see the Boss Lady return the favour in the sequel you've, most definitely, got to write! Keep writing and we'll keep reading!

Absolutely supurb! One of the best stories I have ever read.

Good story. It wasn't the way that I thought that it was going to be.

I thought that when she was working in the shoe store that she was going to be seduced by a customer.

Maybe you can include a customer into the next story.

There's no limit on the possibilities there are with her working in a shoe store.

Looking forward to seeing more of.their adventures

As I was reading your story I was mesmerized by the way that you kept reminding us about the aroma of pussy was everywhere.

As far as I'm concerned there's nothing sexier then the smell of pussy. and you kept talking about it throughout the story.

I can confess that when I was through reading it that the scent of pussy was everywhere in the room.

Thanks for a really believable experience

very good

Written by a man.

Very erotic, indeed!