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Click here"Ref?" I said, engulfed in confusion.
I roamed my hands all over my naked body, trying to look for bruises and cuts.
It was really surprising to find my body looking as good as ever, and I was lying outside the basement.
"How the hell is this possible?" I asked myself.
The chilly breeze flowing around me came to a halt.
"It's showtime. Rex will be 'Ref' from now on. 'X' is the sign of crossing, a sealing; and 'F' means freedom, a long awaited independence." Ref told me in a strange voice.
I raised my head, trying to grasp the situation. I looked around me, wondering how he could talk without a mirror.
"But you know, 'F' also means "fuck". You've yet to experience the 'truth'." he added.
Howls of laughter could be heard all around that uninhabited place.
I didn't have any idea what's going to happen to me or what Ref intends to do, and quietly lied on the ground.
The "Cummy Season" has just started.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoYou start a story ...then poof it's over ...no fucking of sister...mother... Aunt... nothing...
WTF DUDE?????
Anonymousabout 10 years agodelete and go back to grade school and LEARN TO WRITE PROPERLY. a real webmaster or editor would have rejected this trash and saved us the pain of reading it.
trite_readerover 10 years agoThat was really terrible. In too many ways to list!!
Where's part two?
Anonymousover 11 years agoLove the sci fi aspect; quirky writing style made it fun to read. I wanted to get to the good ol sex tho.
Humahaalmost 12 years agoAuthorIt seems you don't even know that all the submissions are read by the editor of Literotica before they're posted on this site. And... it's... 100% TRUE!!
To believe it or not is up to you, but you can't deny a true fact.
Ask other writers if you don't believe me!
No submission is posted before the editor's approval, and that's the reason we writers have to wait for a few days to get our submitted work posted on Literotica.
Our submissions are never approved/posted directly.
If we submit something on Monday, and the submitted work doesn't have any problem, it's posted on Literotica after around 3 or 4 days (on Wednesday/Thursday/Friday).
Why? Because the editor reads a specific number of submissions during those 3-4 days before giving their approval.
So, I don't think it's anything like impossible for them to read all the submissions when they take that much time.
The editor acts as a Quality Checker, and so the author isn't the only one responsible to maintain the quality of their work.
I'm a writer of this site and know far better than you about the work procedure of this site.
Ignorant beings are not supposed to open their mouths, because most of the time they can't help but spout crap.
Humahaalmost 12 years agoAuthor@ ass:
If you really think so, then ask those writers who're really appreciated for their work and still get rejection from the editor when there's something wrong with their submission.
The editor allows only those mistakes that could be overlooked, and nothing significantly wrong is tolerated by them.
If this new style is not your cup of tea, don't write idiotic comments.
Not everyone like fetishes and that stands true for writing styles, too.
Many people don't like stories written in present tense, but that doesn't make those stories bad.
Keep your narrow-mindedness to yourself and watch your tongue!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoif you really think that the webmasters check every story before it is posted you are crazy. if they did 75% of the stories here would never have made it and there wouldn't be so many plagerised stories either. NO ONE CHECKS THESE STORIES BEFORE THEY ARE POSTED IT IS UP TO THE WRITER TO MAKE SURE IT IS DONE PROPERLY AND THIS ONE SUCKS.
Humahaabout 12 years agoAuthorI already expected the response I was going to receive after trying this different writing style.
The fact that it's on Literotica means that the Editor found this story interesting and legible enough to be posted on this site.
FYI, Literotica has its standards, and a non-standard submission don't get an approval right away. The Editor never mentioned even a single problem with my submission.
So, don't criticize it just because of your old-fashioned way of thinking.
@ Those who find this story/setup difficult to understand:
The beginning (Chapter 1) could be hard to understand, but it's all for the sake of setting up an interesting plot using my different writing style.
Do you want to keep reading the same things with some changes and modifications here and there? Don't you want to try reading a new style?
Is your brain so adapted to the cliché story-telling that you are unable to try something new?
This first chapter is simply the gateway to the most amazing "Supernatural + Ultimate harem + Awesome and New-Style Sex" World that I wanted to show to you.
Most of you can't even imagine what I'm going to show you through this story.
If you don't like it, I'll stop right here. I won't write anymore.
Sounds good to you? Yeah?
@ Those who like this story and/or want me to continue:
If you want me to continue after receiving so much negative response, remember to vote (at least 3 Stars) and "comment" (obviously, a positive comment).
The fate of this story depends on your votes and comments.
I'm not getting a single cent for the time I intend to spend for "your" fun.
Your comments and votes are the only things I expect in return for my time and work.
I'll see you again with the next chapter if this chapter receives enough good response (you know what you're supposed to do).
digdaddyrichabout 12 years agoThe story was a bit hard to follow, but the strangeness of the storyline made it an interesting read.
Obviously the outrageous concept of the storyline is what has me intrigued.
I hope that there's more to the story yet to come.
Thanks for the read.
