All Comments on 'Heavy Liftin' Ch. 02'

Please continue this story. I really enjoyed this and would love to read the rest of Jason and Melissa's story.

I just read this and hoped that there will be more

What are you waiting for? I have got to hear how things happened for Jason and Melissa. I just discovered this ongoing story and now can't wait for you to write the rest of it. I love your style and descriptions and feel like I know Jason and Melissa already. Love the build up to the relationship in Ch. 1 and cementing their relationship in Ch. 2. Keep up your writing. It would be a shame to leave this one hanging.

Very good so far and now you have left it hangin.Hope you will carry on as it has a lot of potential.

I loved Ch1 & 2. You gotta give us Ch 3 and then some!

You need to finish the story by adding 5 to 6 more chapters. I loved it !

You HAVE to finish this story!! I've enjoyed it so far! Good writing!!

its been 9 years since the last chapter chances are very slim of getting a new one id say

would really like to know what happedened in Ch 03. If you are not going to finish the story would you let somebody else finish it for you? Hopefully you have not passed. several authors have and had their work finished as best as possible. Pray that you are well and just decided to quit writing for us.

That this story is another one not finished.

Great story, loved the characters

Finish the story! Its great!

When are you going to finish it?

pretty obvious this is another one of those that begin a story only to quit half way through

Since it was never finished will give it whats deserved ,, big ole ace

Too bad because it was a good read

to borrow from the story pattern, that was Then, but we are in the Now and nothing is happening.

don't get your hopes up for a ch. 03

A good story, but unfinished.

I know the author published another story after this, but it seems that he abandoned the continuation of this story.

A real pity.

Anyway, 5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

Just as others have said, this was a very good story until the end of the second chapter. And then there was no more. And for 14 years there has been no more. That's a shame and a disappointment. It's too bad FTDS never got hold of this one.

A good start to what could have been a great story. But,...not to be.

Come on Cowboy, you're just cruel! To give us the beginning and development of their characters and story and leave us in readerland hanging on this cliff! Iknow that you've some more chapters languishing in your pc somewhere... Please, please post them for us!

A fan,

Jerry

I think I have learned a lesson. Never start a series without looking at the comments on the final chapter to see if the series is complete. If not, I won’t even start it in the first place.

It was a good story would have been better if it was completed. You just left it hanging at the end of chapter two. I really can see that it was planned that way to possibly let readers form there own chapter 3. Did he have a ring in his jacket pocket because he had something about her hands at the party. Did they get married being togeather 7 years I have to think so. What happened when the gangster father met him? Another chapter needed

So sad that real life has interrupted/killed imaginative writing. Cowboy if you’re still alive thank you for your creativity. If you have died May you Rest In Peace.