All Comments on 'Heena Starts University'

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DumpingtonDumpingtonover 18 years ago
Clever writing style with an enjoyable storyline!

I especially liked the way Jodie brought up the idea of playing "Strip Trivial Pursuit" as a means of the two girls getting out of their clothes together. It was very clever in a secretly seductive manner. I also liked it later on when Jodie asked Heena if she could strip for her, and when she turned around to give the Asian girl a good look at her pretty behind! Very creative and imaginative!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Loved it!

Your writing style is great. I got lost in the story completely, (in a good way). PLease continue this story.

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