All Comments on 'Heidi Beside The River'

No build-up of erotic tension - no explanation of who, why (and where).

Just a sad projection of a (fat) girl with the miscompetition that she gets (self)respect from being a cheap lay - and being taken advantage of as such....

This story is only partly fictional. Heidi didn't need or want much build-up. She was hot to trot before she came down to the river. She was hot to trot 24/7, and shagged a few dozen men and boys as often as she could get one alone.

She had no clue that I had been shagging two of her friends. She thought that she was breaking me in; that she was my first piece of pussy. And that she was taking advantage of me!

I really believed, and still do, that she got her self-respect from getting laid regularly and often.