All Comments on 'Hello'

Mmm... any lady would simply adore being able to experience such a lovely first meet. Very nice descriptions and such a wonderful ending to a story, yet making one want more and more and knowing there is more to come. Please write on, Alan...

Alan, this is lovely, feels very personal, very intimate, really excellent, especially for a first story. Please write more, this is really worth developing, Asha'man's sarcy

a truly sensuous, wonderful story...what woman wouldn't love an experience such as that...keep writing...i can't wait to see what happens next....anabella

oh Alan how i wish i was that lady.. smiles... huggggggs keep writing..

i would love to see what occurs with these two very well done Alan *smiles*

A perfect first meeting... very tender and loving.. smiles girldreams