All Comments on 'Hell's Gate Ch. 01'

A novel idea! With only minimal information we get a good feel for the characters. Look forward to learning more about both. Love the goblins. I think Slake is going to cause trouble. She obviously is too devious and evil to waste.

The seduction seemed a bit fast, but the overall premise is good, I can't wait to see where it goes. The whole 'angels must be chaste' thing seems like it has an 'or else' clause, which should be interesting if you choose that route. A few minor errors, annoying, but expected for most. Good work

The seduction seemed kinda fast but because it was so well written it didnt have much effect on the story. Good stuff keep it up

I thought she gave in way too fast. You hinted that she wasn't totally "holy" with that fight with her dad, but that wasn't enough to explain how quickly she capitulated. And this is a little thing, but wouldn't someone who'd been chaste all their life ask for panties under that sheer skirt?

well done. it's always fun to visit a new world. good characters.