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walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 15 years ago
Great story!

Great job! Imaginitive, erotic, vivid! Super well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Awesome, just as your other stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Sexcellent Story

Awesome job!!!

XXNoraJeanXXXXNoraJeanXXabout 15 years ago
I loved it!

Hey there! I had to leave you a comment. I loved this story. Writing "phone sex" is not easy, but you did so flawlessly. Your sex scene was hot and also well done. I loved this story...thank you! Keep up the great work.

Pirate TregarePirate Tregareabout 15 years ago
Surprise endings

Surprise endings never surprise me.<br>

I <i>used</i> to be able to say that, but not anymore. I truly had no idea Beverly and Emily were two sides of the same coin. This story was well-paced, inventive, and a nicely oblique angle on a fairly unexplored genre for this forum. <br><br>

Oh, and most importantly: the sex was <b><color=red>hot</color></b> and realistic-sounding!<br>

If this were a <i>Hustler</i> review, it'd be the pic where the erection goes straight up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Fantastic!

I always love phone sex and showing up to fuck someone is even better! Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good!

Better!! BEST!!! And you have already gotten there in just your third story! More, please, and soon.

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