by jawanaut
Even knowing the writer's work, this story until now as been good...I know he'll be tempted to go the ways he usually goes, and that's his right as a writer...From the beginning of this story this couple is wild, but never tried out of their marriage...Will they keep that way? For us readers the solution is just wait and hope they stay that way...3* for now
Secondly, you really need an editor. Thirdly, you really need a better storyline. I read this to the end and then wondered what exactly happened? And why did it happen? The one thing I do know is that it was neither interesting or entertaining. 1 star.
The beach boys LOVE your wife!!! :)) gave you a 5
What is the point in adding tags to a story if the annons don't bother checking? Oh and the detractors really need to read the description of LW category. Troglodytes . :-)
fuck you and Rhonda, fuck all the cum licking faggots that love all the wasted sperm that ran down the crack of your whore mother ass, whore wives.
If calling out another really bad cuck story makes me a Troglodyte, then I'll own it.