All Comments on 'Helping Hand'

by Jay321

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sabra16023sabra16023over 10 years ago
Continue???

There needs to be more chapters with everyone . Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
awesome story

Cant wait for part 2

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 10 years ago
A very good start

A little jerky in spots, but very erotic throughout.

I'd like to see what happens now that his twin sister may be in the mix.

Thanks for the read.

McPhibMcPhibover 10 years ago
Always been a fantasy of mine.

How many times I had dreamed of having this happen to me, but alas, never to be.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I hope part 2 is in the works !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story must go on, he has a twin to fuck. Good luck >>>>>>>>>>>>>>

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

Looks like I'm the only dissenter so far. This, to me, was the literary equivalent of "a wide place in the road. And that mom is freaky.

greenhawk46greenhawk46over 10 years ago
hot story

very good, nice hot sex incest story, well done

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WTF

I have no words to describe this story other than disturbing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
To WTF

Let's see.....the site is called Erotica. The category you are reading is called incest. And you were surprised????

Thanks Don

Jay321Jay321over 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I appreciate the input...

mafia, could you explain "a wide place in the road" I don't understand, and I like both the positive and constructive negative feedback.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 6 years ago
Not bad !!!!!

This is one of those stories that needs a part 2 to finish it. A story like this one should never go unended. A nice read thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Does her fuck his sister next i hope he does

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