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chytownchytownabout 12 years ago
Cute!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
turncoat

rudely buggered cornhole, meaty cock is smoked, betrayed!

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 12 years ago
Wrong category

I think this belongs in the Sci-Fi and Fantasy category. (LOL) Thanks. Agree with editing!!!

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioabout 12 years ago
Needs better editing

Distracting to read "having thinking," "one of his hand," and "She slid of the bra." this reader does not expect Shakespeare, but just a little proof-reading and/or editing would improve the readability.

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