All Comments on 'Her First Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Utter shit

Cuck shit, written by a moron.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Typical fuckin Queenslander! My God, you call yourself an Aussie? Fuck me! this was absolute rubbish!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Yep, same old cuck shit.

What is with the Brits & this Aussie? Are they all fags & wimps?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
If that was true...

Why do so many American women move to the UK for a decent shag?

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
Cute little flash story

This was short enough to have been written for premature ejaculators.

Suggestion...either take two more sentences to describe Panda, or change her name to Rose or Patsy or Maria or Tanya! I will employ my seldom-used PC sensitivity and NOT convey the mental image I have for a woman named Panda!

sankageesankageealmost 11 years ago

It actually is a good story in my opinion, only bit to straight forward, should have been written out a bit more, but I love the idea behind it. Try to write the next chapter a bit more elaborate.

chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
This Story**

Was not short enough ZZZZZzzzzzzz. Damn waste of my time. Maybe next time You'll have something to write.

katyontimekatyontimealmost 11 years ago
TOO FAST

Sounds like both men were RABITS.Too fast for a woman to enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It was a bunch of two sentance paragraphs. Wait, can two sentences actually be called a paragraph? Can i get a ruling here?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I guess when this incident happened,i was not even born!!

So many years later,the same thing is gonna happen again๐Ÿ˜œ.

The only difference being, instead of his wife,it's me going to be in her place!!!๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œExcited!!!!๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

At what point did your brain fry and you couldnt recognize how bad this truly was?

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