All Comments on 'Her Last Cherry'

I enjoyed reading about a curvier gal being seen as desirable and sexy. Some great descriptiveness, too. The "squishy, sucking" sounds of Jim's hard cock thrusting into Jenna's wet pussy got to me.

this is probably the most unique style of writing i've seen in a long time on this site. You're not afraid to sound awkward or dare i say unappealing sometimes in your descriptions, because overall it gives a positive effect to the story.

I'd definitely like to see how the "giving her up sooner or later" plays out for Jim. Dunno if it could be erotic, but I really would like to find out, erotic or not.